NARRATIVE WRITING

WALT organise our ideas before writing

The past 2 weeks we have been making a piece of writing.
My writing so far is 3206 words and I am super proud I am not
even finished yet. 

I think that I did very good but I did have a lot of spelling errors.

This is the first paragraph. 

“112 are you ready for blood transplant”
“affirmative mission control.”Here I am in an Ark. (If you are
wondering what an ark is it is a kind of machine that digs and
digs underground then stops and waits for about 50 years after
that it rises and opens). As I walk to my pod I think of all of
the people that are changing. All of the people that are hiding.
Waiting. Hoping for safety to arrive. When my pod closed I fell
asleep and knew I would be in for a big change when I wake up.

Did you like my story? 

Math Dlo

This week my class has been learning about how to use
angles and then make a DLO. At first my DLO was going okay,
but then it started to get hard. The reason why it was so hard
was because I did not know how to explain what you had to do.
After a bit of thinking I went to go and see Ben, he helped me out
a bit.I think that I did very well. All I need to work on is using less
slides. After 2 days I finished it and here it is.

Did you like my DLO?

Trick shot

In Te Ngahere we did a trick shot challenge.
The first instruction was to find a way to get a ping pong ball
into a plastic cup in the most creative way possible.
It had to be at least 3 seconds long. My group was
Jamie, Ben and Zane. The day that we started we finally
figured out what we were going to do. We were going to play
a game of ping pong and I was one of the people playing it.
After we play the game for about 3 to 5 seconds one of us are
going to start bouncing it up and down on the bat then pretty
much put it in the cup.