Mind Blowing Facts About My Jumbled Text.

 This term in Te Ngahere we have been doing a Jumbled Text. A Jumbled Text is a text that the paragraphs are not in order so you have to correct it. The reason why we were doing a jumbled text was because we were going to write a story and we needed to know how to lay it out. I think that I did okay. I did get some feedback but in the end I got it all done. Our jumbled text and the story was supposed to be about friends. When we write our story it will go onto our report.

Here is my completed jumbled text link.

Have you ever done a jumbled to text?

Mind Blowing Facts About My Creative Writing Sample.

 This term in Te Ngahere we did a Creative Writing Sample to see how we write now and at the end of the term we do the same, hopefully our writing has improved even more.  First we had to choose a feeling and that would be the main feeling throughout the whole text. After that we had to write where the story was set. For my feeling I chose nervous and for my scene I chose A battle between 3 then 2 then 1 ship. The reason why the number of ships goes down is because there is a battle and one of the ships get sunk then the other gets sunk too. I got the mood and atmosphere (feeling and scene) from a book that I really like.

Here is the link to my short text link.

I think that I did well because if this were the blurb for a book I would buy it.

Have you ever done a Creative Writing Sample?

Mind Blowing facts about our T Ball.

 This term in Te Ngahere we have been learning how to play T Ball. The rules to T Ball are when you hit the ball you have to run even if you are already on a base. When there are no more chances to get anybody out the backstop shouts ball in and they get ready for the next batsman. Every time somebody makes it to home base then the batting team get one home run. After everyone on the batting team has a go at batting they switch over. When we played we batted first and got 7 points and when it was our teams time to bat I was the backstop. I was the first backstop in the whole entire game to get someone out because one of the people clipped the ball so I got it and put the ball on homebase before the runner did. In the end my team won the score was 11 to us and 7 to the other team.

I think that I did well because  (with help from my team) I got almost the whole of the other team out.

Have you ever played T Ball  before?